Now the thing about editing is that sometimes we want to say something but are unsure what to say so we end up saying everything that comes into our minds all at once without thinking of stopping or breathing or anything else just to get the words out and hope the message we want to say is the right message when all you want to say is that you have something to say.
That was a tough sentence, wasn't it? Out of breath yet?
How about hiring me to turn that sentence into: Be confident choosing weighty words. Speak with clarity to get your message across.